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This is an optional sequel! if you were happy with the original ending then you don't have to read the sequel. Please no flams.


You laid on your bed staring at the ceiling, mulling Alfred’s words in your mind. You finally stood up to him, but you didn’t feel like you thought it was going to feel. If anything you felt more alone than ever. You felt empty inside. Maybe you should have given him a chance? You began to argue with yourself in your head.

‘No! He had his chance, and killed it!’

‘Everyone deserves a second chance.’

‘How can I trust him after what he did?’

‘Alfred is the type of guy who learns from his mistakes.’

You sighed, not wanting to deal with this, and pulled the covers over you.


The next day you really didn’t want to go to school, but you did anyway. Things were pretty much the same. A few pushes here and there, and a couple name callings, but nothing too severe. That was until you saw Gilbert and Mathias moving towards you with sadistic smirks. You tried to ignore them and walk past them, but Gilbert shoved you against the lockers.

“Hallo there, unawesome frau.” He sneered.

“Leave me alone you idiots!” you said threateningly.

They chuckled at your reaction, and Mathias gripped your shirt collar.

“Looks like the girl has grown a spirit.” He said.

“Well it seems like we have to put the frau in her place, wont we?” Gilbert snickered while cracking his knuckles, that annoying laugh of his making you slightly wince.

“Hold her still.” Gilbert ordered Mathias.

Mathias gripped you tighter, and Gilbert lifted his fist ready punch you. You closed your eyes waiting for the pain, but I never came.

SMACK!

You opened your eyes and gasped at what you saw.
 
Alfred had yanked Gilbert away from you and threw him on the floor, harshly. He gripped the whited haired boy’s shirts and shoved him against the lockers, looking like he was ready to kill Gilbert.

“If you ever bother (y/n) again, if you so much as look at her, I swear after I’m done with you, you’ll be in the hospital for weeks! Got it?!”

By now there was a crowed of students who had shocked looks on their faces.

“And that goes for all of you!” Alfred shouted at the stunned students watching the scene.

“Ja ja! I won’t bother her anymore, I swear!” Gilbert said, truly frightened of his old friend.

Alfred let go of Gilbert, and the Prussian sprinted away in a mad panic along with Mathias. You didn’t know what to do. You were about to say something, but Alfred had already walked off.


After that day, no one bothered you. Everyone was afraid to even look at you, fearing Alfred would deal with them. Alfred was defiantly different, but not in good way. You saw the way he looked every day at school. He always looked angry, but when you would catch his gaze he would look at you like an abandoned puppy. You couldn’t stand to see him like this.

It had been almost a month, and nothing has gotten better. You couldn’t keep ignoring him like this; you knew you had to talk to him. You weren’t scared of him anymore.

After class you went to try to find him. You spotted him at his locker, a gloomy aura surrounding him.

“A-Alfred.” You shuddered.

He looked at you, a little surprised that you were talking to him. He had dark circles under his eyes.

“Can we talk, please?” you asked.

He nodded and walked outside, and you followed. Class was in session so you two were alone. He sat on a bench and you joined him, he wasn’t looking at you.

“What did you want to talk about, (y/n)?” his voice was dead.

“I’m worried about you.” you said.

He looked at you, “I’m just doing what you said, we should move on with our lives and part ways…”

“I…I think I was wrong.” You said.

He looked at you confused.

“I mean I thought that if we parted that I would finally feel better, but I just ended up hurting you, like you hurt me.”

He slightly cringed at your words, the guilt seen in his eyes.

“I think we are both broken, Alfred. And ignoring each other obviously hasn’t helped us.”

“What are you saying, (y/n)?” Alfred said softly.

“We need to help each other, to heal both of us.” You said closing your eyes, a tear sliding down your cheek.

You felt a thumb wipe away your tear. You opened your eyes and saw that Alfred was crying too, but was smiling warmly.

“I agree (y/n).” he whispered.

“But it’s going to take some time, Alfred.” You said, grasping his hand gently.

“I know, but we’ll make it. I know it.” He said sincerely.

“(y/n)?” he asked.

“Yeah?”

“Can I h-hug you, please.” He asked a tint of fear in his voice.

“Yes.” You breathed.

There it was. One of those bear hugs you missed for so many years. You hesitantly wrapped your arms around Alfred and he buried his face in your neck. He was crying again and so were you.

“I missed you so much, (y/n).” he said in between sobs.

“I missed you too, Alfred.” You said wiping your tears away, only to be replaced by more.

You stayed in each other’s arms for what felt like hours. Only to be interrupted by the school bell. You both pulled away slowly. You sniffed and rubbed your eyes.

“I guess we should go to class.” Alfred said.

You looked back at the school and shook your head, “No.”

“What?” he said confused.

You looked back at him and smiled, “We should get out of here.”

“Wait, what?” he asked.

“I said we should leave.” You said.

“And go where?” he chuckled.

“I don’t know, anywhere but here.” You said.

He thought hard for a second then his eyes light up and grasped your hand.

“Come on, dudette!” he said, excitedly.

You were pulled up on your feet by him and he pulled you towards his car.

“Where are we going?” you asked.

“Where we belong.” He said.

He ended up taking you to the old burger joint you two used to go to all the time. You smiled at the old memories that were coming back. He took your hand and led you to a nearby booth. Honestly, it felt a bit awkward, but it also felt right.

“So what happens now?” you asked Alfred who was stuffing his face with French fries.

He took a minute to finally swallow and wipe his mouth with a napkin. He sighed and took your hand.

“Like you said, ‘it’s going to take some time’.  I mean we can’t just go along like nothing has happened, you know?” he said.

“Right, but do you honestly think it will ever be the same?” you asked.

“I don’t know (y/n), I wish I could say yes, but I don’t know.”  He said looking sad.

“But if we help each other, I really think it could work out in the end.” You said.

“You really think so, (y/n)?” he said, his blue eyes glistening with hopefulness.

“Of course I do. Now finish your damn cheeseburger, we still have a video game to finish.” You said playfully punching his shoulder.

“Forget the food dude, let’s get out of here! Race ya dude!” he hollered.

You both sprinted out of the burger joint, racing to his car and headed off to Alfred’s house. You both spent the whole night playing video games, eating junk food, watching horror movies. For the first time in a long time, you felt truly happy to be with Alfred. You knew you would never forget what he did in the past, but you knew that you needed to be there for him. He needed you and you needed him, because you both were best friends, true friends that would never abandon each other again.
Okay so this sequel is optional, if you were happy with the first ending then you don't have to read this. I just got a lot of requests for a sequel so I tried my best. if you don't like it, oh well.
Enjoy!

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rosebud962704 Featured By Owner 4 days ago
Ok i thought this was going to be an ending where the make out or something (nothing against those who right those endings to bullying aus but it's not my cup of tea) but this ending to me is more realistic and I love it! Thank you for the great read!
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Xironrose Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you ^^
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Gaffiecat16 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like this but what happened to him? Like...? I can't figure it out
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KitCatty235 Featured By Owner May 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
From what I can gather, Alfred scared away everyone from so much as looking at you, but was so hung up on your words and actions of leaving him he kinda just... dulled over?

He lost weeks of sleep, based on the deep dark circles, and it was stated he had a gloomy and usually agitated tone to him? So I'm guessing those nights staying up were spent thinking on how he hurt you, ruined your relationship with him, and how much he hated himself for it..

That's what I gathered, though in my mind I made a mini side thing of his POV. It was pretty saddening, but eh- That's how it is.

-shrugs-
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Gaffiecat16 Featured By Owner May 7, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I understand that it's just... I don't understand how they went from being the bestest of friends to bully and victim. *shrugs*
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KitCatty235 Featured By Owner May 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, well then I have no other way to explain it... I mean, there's no reason most times, even in real life. 

It just... happens.
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Gaffiecat16 Featured By Owner May 7, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*hums thoughtfully* Yeah... Suppose they do
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LostIslands12 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  Student Artisan Crafter
:D BRO YOU ARE SO AWESOME FOR MAKING DIS! 20% awesomer than rainbow dash and Gilbertrainbow dash my little pony mlp brony Prussia (Explaining) [V4] Prussia (Arrives to explain) [V3] America (The Hero) [V2] 
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Youmaycallmecool Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
IM SMILING LIKE A CRAZY PERSON
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Heta-chanQueen900 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Everyday at my school, I'm like Canada and I don't get noticed by anyone
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TheMostEdgyKitty Featured By Owner May 5, 2015
I'm like Canada with some people, when I am annoyed: Russia and England. But when someone is scaring me slightly (or just when I am scared in general) Italy!
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cr8zyg8rl Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I'm like Canada and Russia in one, with a hint of Francis, and a teaspoon of England and Italy. The side dish is Romano and Japan and Greece. Basically a Hetalia description.
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Heta-chanQueen900 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool
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Xironrose Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i was the same when i was in high school.
i remember i would go through classes and nobody would talk to me except for a few close friends, it was like i was invisible!
College is so much better! :dance: XD I've met Brazilian soccer players, and also met my best friend! 
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Heta-chanQueen900 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome! :3
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Xironrose Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:hug:
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Heta-chanQueen900 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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kidxmaka11 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
this was hard for me to read because I lost a friend cuz they were spreading rumors and stole my money, also using my phone that she stole to gain populatiy
then I have a friend that idk is really my friend...

but dis was really cute~!
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iAMaSTARKIDranger Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2015  New member
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kidxmaka11 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015
XD thx! Butz I'mz coolz! Online friends are better than school ones anyway~!
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Xironrose Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So sorry that happened to you! :hug: 
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kidxmaka11 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015
they both went to my group today and infront of everyone they asked to be my friends again and I got to scared to say no with 50 people looking at me... I want to know how they even KNOW me! Im like Canada if my 5 friends and my teachers aren't around!
now im friends with lying backstabbers!
I swear people online are much better then people I see everyday!
and thx! HUGS FOR EVERYONE CUZ I LIKE HUGS!!!
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Xironrose Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
(sorry for the late reply) I'm sorry hun :hug: you must feel really stressed, but don't worry cause your life is gonna be great in the future!! :glomp: 
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kidxmaka11 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015
(Its okay~) Yeah, now I just pushed my crush to ask out dis one girl he likes, so he's asking today, I'm hoping yet not hoping she says no!
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dabestperson Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015
Wait I thought that the part 1 was about England but is part 2 about America
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Xironrose Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
there is another story with bully England but it is an entirely different story. This story is part 2 to bully America part 1. Bully America part 1  
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dabestperson Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015
Oooooooh
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Xironrose Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sorry about the confusion XD
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Queenelsa108 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Professional Photographer
THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!Epic clap :sonicclap: :excited: excited happy Excited Blush excited :excited: rvmp :chairdance: Excited :omgomg: Can we go NAO Squee! Excited Ultra Excitement Are You Happy Squee Bounce Anime Emoji (Blush Oh yay dance) [V6] :omgomgbb: :happy-wave: Excited Squishy :excited: revamp :tribblela: :yayay: - NaNoEmo 24/30 + Plz :squee: revamp Happy Clap So Excited Emote :gcexcited: :bounce: Emotion-Yeeey! Excited Ninten 
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Xironrose Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you!:heart::D
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WriterChan Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can totally relate to this minus the getting beat up part AND the not fighting back part. Situational though
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Thesoulmeister Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I. NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED. MOAR.
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Rainbowuniverse500 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY MY FEELS ARE CURED!
I am a dummy!
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*SCREAMING*
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sparklerthesableye Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok. I am satisfied. I dunno why, but towards the beginning, I was like *infinite eyebrow wiggle*
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kittykat2245 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
My happy soul can rest nowRacing Girl Emoji (Running Cry) [V2] 
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tiger-lily-swift Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014  Student Interface Designer
:iconomgcryplz:
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hetaliabug Featured By Owner Edited Oct 3, 2014
Omfg this is amazing u little muffin
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Xironrose Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Llama Emoji-09 (Drinking Tea) [V1]  Thank you!
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Great-Midnight-Magic Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
You know how you always have those songs that go along with what you feel? Well, 'I'm not okay (I promise)' by 'My Chemical Romance' is what I'm feeling right now.
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Xironrose Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i love that song!:heart:
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Great-Midnight-Magic Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Ya know that moment bruh?
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ImDifferent110 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014
[EXO] Kris ''Legit'' Crying Emoticon [EXO] Kris ''Legit'' Crying Emoticon ... I'm ok, really... omg cry omg cry 
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LuckRose Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014
Yay!
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Xironrose Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:boogie:
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LuckRose Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014
=3
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RubyBadAppleDream Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Student Artist
At least you saved the others. I just died her trying my best not to fangirl
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LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I wanted a sequel because I wanted a happy ending where the reader becomes a strong independant woman! No amount of apologies could fix such abuse. I know he truly feels sorry, and i'm glad he does, but I felt no closure in this. I also know this was optional, but if a sequel is going to e made, I think it should make more sense. I love the idea that you made a sequel to give a satisfying ending for others, but this ending didn't do anything but make me confused as to if the reader even cared about all the problems she faced.
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DB4Lyfe Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
Shhhhh you get to hug Alfred *hands you an Alfred plushie*
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LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I am so temped to throw this at the the wall. So. TEMPTED.
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