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(Country name) was currently running for her young life. Everywhere she looked was disaster. Her beautiful country was falling apart; almost everything was lying in ruins. Being such a young country, she didn’t know what to do.  The last of her soldiers were desperately trying to fight off the numerous enemy troops that invaded her home land.

Her boss had cowardly fled the dying country, leaving her and her people venerable for the current overthrow and destruction. She knew she had to think of something fast to save her people.

Why did this happen? What had she done wrong? She truly thought they cared for her.


(C/N) was on her way to the World Meeting looking forward to see her friends again. What she didn’t know was that the Axis and Allies were planning on taking the young country for themselves. All the other countries knew this so they didn’t show up for this meeting, not wanting to get involved.

You entered the meeting room with your usual friendly smile, but it quickly faded when the room was unsettlingly silent. You looked over that the other countries who had serious looks on their faces.

“What’s going on? Where is everybody?” you asked, getting nervous.

“Love, have a seat.” Britain said.

“Not until you tell me what’s going on.” you said worried.

There was a long silence and she was growing uneasy in the atmosphere you were usually comfortable in.

“How are we supposed to terr her this.” You noticed Japan whisper to Germany.

Germany sighed and stood up.

“Vell we’ve been discussing about your current growing status and have come to ze conclution that…vell…” he trailed off.

“Bottom line is that we all want you as our territory.” America admitted seriously, which scared you.

You didn’t know what to say. You didn’t want to be a territory that was controlled by another country.  You were doing just fine on your own, and you wanted to remain a free country.

“What? No! Why do you want me?” you asked shocked.

“Your country has grown to be quite wealthy very quickly and could be useful -” China began but was cut off by you.

“Is that what this is about? Money?!” you were angry now.

“Please chérie, don’t be upset…” France said sympathetically.

“Yes, love, we don’t want to cause you any harm.” Britain said.

“Hai, we truly care about you, (C/N).” Japan said.

“No! If you really cared about me you wouldn’t put me through this!” you yelled and were about to storm out of the room when Russia grabbed your wrist.

“If you don’t choose one of us, we will invade your homeland da…” he said looking down at you.

By now you were terrified. You struggled your way out of Russia’s firm clutch and quickly ran out of the room.

“Germany, are we really going to invade (C/N)?” Italy asked a little startled by all the commotion.

“She’s just being stubborn. She has to understand that she won’t stand a chance, her military isn’t very strong.” Britain said, taking a sip of his tea.

“I don’t think I can go through with this. I mean she’s still really young and I don’t want to hurt her.”  Italy said.

“Dude I don’t want to hurt her either, but we need her resources.” America said.

Italy sank back down in his seat, looking down.

“So it’s settled then. Everyone, prepare your military.” Germany stated.

You made it out of the building and collapsed on the ground, filled will shock and fear. You were panting heavily and began to cry.

How could they do this to you? They always treated you like a sister and a friend and were always there for you.

‘They were going to invade my country, all for their stupid profit!’ you thought.

Apparently that was all you meant to them, just another thing to take control and use for their benefit. You felt so betrayed, but you knew this was not the time to act like a kid. You had to grow up and deal with this, somehow.

You rubbed your nose and quickly headed to your country to warn your people of the hell that was waiting for them.


You shook your head of the painful memory; you had to focus. You looked around as if trying to look for hope itself. You looked at your poor soldiers trying to fight off the German, British, and American troops. You knew it would be a matter of time when they were all massacred.

You ran up to your soldiers’ leader.

“Tell them to retreat, now.” You ordered.

“Are you sure, (C/N)?” the Commander asked.

“Yes, get them out of here, you too. Find any citizens left behind and help them find safety.” You said.

“What about you?” he asked, concerned.

“This country is dying…I’m sorry I failed you.” you said looking down.

The commander nodded and placed his hand on your shoulder.

“It’s been an honor to serve you, (C/N), goodbye.”

He ran off to tell the soldiers of your order and they all began to run off into the ruined city, helping any citizens out of the fallen country.

You were alone; standing in once was the fresh green grass of your beautiful land, now was reduced to dust and death. As your country continued to perish you felt yourself dying inside. You quickly felt weak and tired. You collapsed on the dry dirt and looked up at the sky. You knew what was happening; your country was dying and so were you.
You felt your body becoming drained of life; you closed your eyes as you let out your final breath.

“Where can she be?” Britain said desperately.

“I don’t know, she has to be here somewhere, aru.” China said.

“Dudes we have to find her soon. This was a mistake!” America said.

“Oui I’m so worried about her, look what we did to her land.” France said.

“(C/N)! (C/N)! Where are you, belle?!” Italy franticly shouted for you.

“Italy I’m sure she’s…” Germany began but was cut off by seeing something in the distance.

They all looked in the same direction and gasped in shock.

“(C/N)! No!” Italy shouted, running over and picked up your lifeless body in his arms and cried into your neck.

The rest of the countries arrived and were heartbroken at the sight. Japan hesitantly took your cold hand and desperately waited for a pulse. He sighed and looked to the other countries and shook his head.

“OH GOD NO!!” Britain sank to his knees by your body; taking your hand and holding it in his, gently embracing it.

Italy continued to rock your body in his arms, while Germany had his face buried in his hands. America cried into Frances shoulder, France hugged the poor American while crying himself. Japan couldn’t bear to see you like this anymore and turned away and hugged a grieve stricken China. Russia looked down and shut his eyes, a tear falling from his closed eyes.

“What have we done…?” Germany sighed.

“No, no…she doesn’t deserve to die like this, god I’m so sorry, (C/N)…” Britain cried into your dead hand.


The Axis and Allies joined up once again to head to the land that was once (C/N) to pay their respects. They have been doing this every year for the past 100 years so they will never forget (C/N), and the tragedy they caused. When they arrived though, they were shocked by the sight before them.

“Oh my, it that…” China began.

“Yes it is!”

They looked over at once was dead and dry dirt, was now freshly grown baby grass. Little baby trees and plants were beginning to flourish.

“It’s beautifur…” Japan said.

“Everyone, what is that over there.” Russia said pointing in the distance.

They looked where he was point and small child sitting in the grass playing with a bunny.

“Doesn’t that look like…?” America began.

“Yes it does.” Britain said.

They slowly approached the small girl, not wanting to scare her. She looked up at the countries and smiled sweetly while holding the bunny.

“Hi” she squeaked.

“Ciao bella my name is Italy” Italy said crouching down next to the girl.

“Hi” she repeated.

They couldn’t help but chuckle how adorable she was.

“Hello poppet, what are you doing out here alone?” Britain said, sitting next to the child.

“I’ve been trying to find out why I’m here.” she said, petting the bunny.

“Chérie! You must be a new country, little one.” France squealed.

She smiled and nodded.

“She must be related to (C/N).”  Japan said.

“Yes, I agree. The resemblance is astounding, aru.” China said.

“Totally dude! I wanna meet the little dudette!” America said, sitting down next to the girl.

“So you have a name little dudette?” America asked the girl.

“I’m, (C/N).” the small girl uttered, making the countries gasp.

“Is that even possible? Can she really be, (C/N)?” France asked.

“I’ve heard about this happening before, but it’s very rare.” Japan said.

“It must be a miracle, da?”

As the other countries were talking with the new country, Germany and Japan continued to watch.

“We have to be careful we will not make the same mistake again, or she would be gone forever.” Germany said to Japan.

“Hai, just like what Russia said, this is trury a miracle.” Japan said.

Italy picked up the small girl and cradled her in his arms, and she quickly fell asleep.

“The poor little thing must be tired.” France said.

“She is so cute, aru.” China said.

Italy held the little nation more protectively and kissed her forehead.

“Don’t worry, belle, we will never hurt you ever again. We promise to protect you my little belle.”

The End.
sorry if the ending was a little lazy, I was really tired when I wrote this.
but I hope you enjoy!

Hetalia belongs to Hidekaz Himaruya
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DaniellexBarbarack Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*cries silently* You broke me.....
luckystar66 Featured By Owner Edited 5 days ago
Dude! I cried so hard.......
I love this story so much!!!!
Xironrose Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you ^^
kotadog88 Featured By Owner May 11, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
im doing my sequel to this
*wake up in italys bed smelling pasta*huh? *heads down stairs and peaks throught edoor way to the living room first but saw something that broke her heart* *a commander was there teh same commander of germanys troops that attcked her country* *GASPS*
germany: *whips his head over to equastria*l-luna what are you doing up?
i woke up and smeeled pasta then i se this? *remembers everything* WHY?! *runs out her body changing to a a 16 year old body with a nice lolita dress on*
italy: ve? LUNA COME BACK VE!
*hides in teh world conference building whimpering*
let me know if you want more
Urufugaru-Wolf-Girl Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Xironrose Featured By Owner May 1, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! :)
secretk11 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015
*Flashbacks to previous life* GASP I REMEMBER NOW *hisses and runs away* ARRGHHH
CaptinJessy Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015
I was Crying so much! It didn't help that I was listening to sad music....this is amazing and I love it! You did an amazing job on it!
Xironrose Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you :) :heart: 
CaptinJessy Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015
No problem! It really is amazing!
GamerGirl62 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Xironrose Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! :)
GamerGirl62 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LillysHere Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Omg I cried so much ;_; !!
Same here. snuggy sob 
TheMonsterInsideofMe Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015  New member
That was beautiful.
OMG this was the first fan fic to make me cry every time I read it. 😢It was butiful.
thank u for making it. 
You are a great writer. 😊
Xironrose Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you :) Glad you liked my story! :hug:
TheFireDragonesReshi Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  Student Filmographer
Philippines shall be known!
TheAwsomeAsianGirl Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015  New member
Yes proudly pinoy
TheFireDragonesReshi Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015  Student Filmographer
purplegirl369 Featured By Owner Edited Mar 28, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
This is the first fanfic to make me cry and I've read tons.Congrats.... * cries*
VanessaKnight Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015
I didn't get tired to read this!!~ 
sunset30 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015
Italy Chibi (Crying) [V4] *crys*
Xironrose Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AnimeGeekKatie Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Xironrose Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! ^^
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Poor Italy, I feel like he took the rough hit of C/N Dieing ;-; And the there's too! It's so sad yet amazing TT^TT
Xironrose Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you :hug:
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Np! Emoticon: Huggle :'3
megatejja Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015
my heart can't take itI think I've fainted. 
Rj223 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015
Hahaha surprise bitch. I bet you thought you'd seen the last of me. *turns around dramatically like in ahs*
ManiacleTurtles Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015
I think I just died inside. 
And then, was brought back by the pure and adorable image that settled into my head at the end. 
I dont know what to think of life anymore.
Ilovehetalia224 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015
I would go up to them  and be like nope *slaps them and back walkovers out to once in a lifetime by 1d* I think that song just fits
peachykeen3502 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015
I can just imagine *walks up to countries* "surprise mutherfunkers!"
Xironrose Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha! that's perfect! XD
IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not crying nope
nightmareshadow1 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Student Interface Designer
this so cute
Xironrose Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you :D
WonderboltBinBin Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
im89la Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015
Aw.....that is sooo cute! Not when she dies.....that's sad, but when she is reborn, it's so cute!
Xironrose Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you!! :la:
Youmaycallmecool Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Romano (Mustache Laughs) [V1] Me as a country....
Choochcraft Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015   Artist
Please make a squeal. It was sad to read at first but then I became really good
Randomhetaliafan2 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Wales lives on :DDDD Dance Foxy Thumbs Up Azusa Shy Icon 
Golden1Bonnie Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kaori Cheering Icon 
Randomhetaliafan2 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
WOOOOO Bumper Cars! (Bonnie Chat Icon) 
My name is Fiji and you made me tear up.
*reads part about me dying*

Me: Whatever, I'll just resurrect myself.

*reads part about coming back*

Ha! Told you.
Thebbfofanime Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015  Student Digital Artist
the feels 
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